Day Six — Burleson, 2005

Alan Marley • August 8, 2025

April 21, 2005 – Elm Street, Burleson, Texas

The smell of ozone and fresh asphalt still hung in the spring air. Days after the hailstorm that pounded Burleson, roofing crews buzzed like locusts across every block, and contractor yard signs sprouted faster than weeds.


Mark Keller parked two doors down from the Lawson house and walked up a cracked sidewalk lined with tarp-covered vehicles and stripped trees. The neighbor — Mabel Carson, age 68 — met him at the porch with a cigarette in hand and suspicion in her eyes.


“You’re not wearing no badge,” she said.


Keller gave her a half-smile and held up his ID. “FBI. I’m looking into the incident at the Lawson home.”


Mabel exhaled a stream of smoke. “Incident? That lady’s dead.”


“Yes, ma’am,” he said. “And I think someone might’ve made sure of it.”


That got her attention. She stepped aside, letting him onto the porch. “Come on then. I already told that local cop what I saw, but he just said ‘Thank you, ma’am’ like I was crazy.”


“What exactly did you see?” Keller asked, flipping open his notepad.


Mabel leaned against the porch rail. “Day after the storm, I’m watching the crews from the window, you know, making sure nobody tries to snatch my generator. This guy walks up to the Lawson place. Not a roofer, not a looter either. Clean boots. Clipboard in his hand.”


“Description?” Keller asked.


“Tall. Maybe six-two. White guy. Forty-ish. Brown hair. Neat. No company logo I could see. Didn’t knock. Just walked right up the drive like he owned the place.”


Keller jotted the notes. “You’re sure he didn’t knock?”


Mabel gave him a sharp look. “I might be old, but I can see, Agent. He went around the back like he knew the layout.”


Keller’s pen stopped. “Did he carry anything besides the clipboard?”


“Gloves. He put them on right before he turned the corner.”


That detail hit like a stone in Keller’s stomach. “What kind of vehicle?”


“White SUV. Big one. Parked half a block up.”


“See the license plate?”


“No. He backed it in. But it had out-of-state tags.”


Keller looked up. “Which state?”


She squinted. “Couldn’t say. Might’ve been Kansas. Or Kentucky. Had a blue band across the top.”


He wrote Out-of-state plate (blue band). Possibly rental.


“Then what?” he asked.


“Nothing. I turned away to make lunch. When I looked back, he was gone.”


“And Mrs. Lawson?”


“Didn’t see her again. Not alive, anyway.”


Keller returned to the office late that evening, past sunset. The fluorescent lights buzzed overhead as he sifted through DMV queries, trying to narrow down rental SUV plates matching Mabel’s vague description.


The system gave him nothing. Dozens of hits across Texas, Oklahoma, Kansas. All dead ends.


In frustration, he stood and pinned Mabel’s sketchy details to the corner of his cubicle wall:


  • Clipboard
  • White SUV, backed in
  • No logo
  • Gloves before entry


Then he circled a single word:
Adjuster?



It made sense. In chaos, everyone welcomed a man with a clipboard. A badge. A story. Nobody questioned someone evaluating damage.


Especially not a woman alone in her home, waiting for someone to walk through the ruins and offer help.

Keller whispered to himself, “He’s hiding in the open. Walking right through the front door.”


But the case was closing fast. The autopsy listed death by cardiac arrest — “consistent with stress-induced natural causes.” The local coroner, overwhelmed with post-storm fatalities, didn’t dig deeper.


The Bureau dropped the case.


And within two weeks, Mabel’s memory faded under the weight of new roof estimates, FEMA claims, and utility bills.


The trail went cold.


Until twenty years later.


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